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In the park by Pajunen In the park by Pajunen
Dublin, Ireland
July 2012
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:iconichliebedeutschland:
Ichliebedeutschland Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Student Photographer
Nice black and white shot!
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:iconpajunen:
Pajunen Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you!
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:iconrezzanatakol:
RezzanATAKOL Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012
Beautifull lighting and composition:))
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:iconpajunen:
Pajunen Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you!
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OilLady Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012   Writer
This is one of the few times where I think the choices you made just don't work.

First, you chose black and white, and so for more than a few seconds, I mistakenly thought this was a winterscape and that the tree branches were weighed down with heavy wet snow.

Second, the main subject of the photo is supposedly the little boy feeding the birds. But the tree branches overpower so very much of the image that they shunt the little boy aside, and it's hard to see him against the extreme visual competition from the branches. Specifically, not only do the branches take up over half of the frame, but they have a vibrance to them that is more dynamic and attention-geting than the very static little boy.

Third, we see five human figures off to the right, and the little boy is supposed to be the main focus. But he is the least interesting of the five human figures, as well as the least defined. Perhaps if he was more in a sharp silhouette, or if maybe the adult standing right behind him didn't have those annoyingly white-ish socks and shoes and hat, then maybe the boy's fgure would be more accessible to the beholder of this photo.

I realize this was likely a totally unstaged photo, and you just happened to be in the right place at the right time. But the elements don't work, especially for black and white.

Maybe if yiou tweak thing up a bit with photo manipulation --make the boy more defined, give the adult behind him black pants and black socks and even a black hat to give the adult more definition --maybe then we will gravitate to the boy a little more. But even then, the tree branches are STILL too overpoweringly vibrant and attention-getting.
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Michawolf13 Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:wow: Beautiful!
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:iconpajunen:
Pajunen Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you!
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Speck2 Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
WOW!!! Amazing!!
Cindy
:heart: :hug:
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:iconpajunen:
Pajunen Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you!
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Speck2 Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Most welcome !!
Cindy
:santa: :heart:
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:iconkogacchi:
Kogacchi Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Kaunis, varmasti ollut mielenkiintoinen näky. :3
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:iconpajunen:
Pajunen Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Kiitos!
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:iconhikarinochou:
HikarinoChou Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Wow, this is so beautiful! :D :aww:
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:iconpajunen:
Pajunen Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you!
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ShlomitMessica Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
wonderful-the scene and the scape !
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:iconpajunen:
Pajunen Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you!
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Alura-the-Sage Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
"Feed the birds, tuppence a bag, tuppence, tuppence, tuppence a bag..."
Ah, childhood. This is a beautiful picture! :)
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:iconpajunen:
Pajunen Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you!
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GlassHouse-1 Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012
Wow, love that tree.
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:iconpajunen:
Pajunen Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you!
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:iconglasshouse-1:
GlassHouse-1 Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012
You're welcome.
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:iconmorningstarskid:
morningstarskid Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Professional Artist
nice!!
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:iconpajunen:
Pajunen Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you!
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:iconmorningstarskid:
morningstarskid Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Professional Artist
Welcome sir!!
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:iconsternenfern:
sternenfern Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
nice Scene here :-)
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:iconpajunen:
Pajunen Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you!
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AntonioGouveia Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Good shot!
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:iconpajunen:
Pajunen Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you!
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AntonioGouveia Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
You're welcome!
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catch---22 Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Professional Photographer
a beautiful life scape Pajunen!
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:iconpajunen:
Pajunen Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you!
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:iconcatch---22:
catch---22 Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Professional Photographer
you're welcome!
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jacksipod1023 Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
looks great!
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:iconpajunen:
Pajunen Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Thanks!
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:iconromylyn:
Romylyn Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012
Great black and white picture!
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:iconpajunen:
Pajunen Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you!
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thanksthatisenough Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012
lovely capture
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:iconpajunen:
Pajunen Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you!
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thanksthatisenough Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012
My big pleasure :)
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Make
Canon
Model
Canon EOS 550D
Shutter Speed
1/32 second
Aperture
F/5.6
Focal Length
18 mm
ISO Speed
320
Date Taken
Jul 28, 2012, 1:28:29 PM
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EF-S18-55mm f/3.5-5.6 IS
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